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Wednesday, October 10, 2012

NaNoWriMo Mockups!

 

I've created two mockups of my novel for NaNoWriMo this year. Let me know what you think. You don't have to pick one or the other. You can comment on both and the things you like/dislike about them. Thanks!

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Personally, I like the first one better... it looks creepier, somehow. (And I'm assuming that you're not writing a romance novel... right?)

Posted 10/10/2012 1:13 PM by Passionflwr86 Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - recommend - reply

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@Passionflwr86 - No, not a romance novel. lol Thanks!

Posted 10/10/2012 1:18 PM by MyxlDove Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - recommend - reply

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I like the first one better. The image better matches the font and title, Malaise. The only thing that catches uncomfortably for me is the line on the bottom. Is there a reason that is there? (Secondarily, the word "Annals" is a distraction, for me, and make me look twice, like, "did that just say "Anal?" Immature, perhaps. But I am a reader, and are you writing for yourself or for your audience?)

Posted 10/10/2012 3:00 PM by sarahsmurfette Xanga True Member - recommend - reply

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They're both beautiful pics.

Posted 10/10/2012 3:02 PM by olwd Xanga True Member - recommend - reply

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Another vote for the first one. Very atmospheric and more evocative of the title. I think I will sign up this year, too. :)
Posted 10/10/2012 10:02 PM by karos Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - recommend - reply

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The first one looks more like something is or could be wrong, because yellow is the perceived color of sickness.  The second one looks more like a tropical escape and I see no malaise.

Posted 10/12/2012 7:13 PM by wickedgood Xanga Lifetime Member - recommend - reply


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