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Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Unphysical Things

 
I look at you and constantly marvel
just how fortunate am I to see
this beautiful form and essence
that has been gifted to me

Radiant movements beneath shadowed fabric
Trace a path the leads me to your eyes
the rise and fall of a hundred inhales
my present life rests here, I realize

The fullness of a kiss that conveys your intentions
unspoken promises and confessions you own
I'm drawn into the depth of your intimate whispers
a clarity of sound and melodic tone

Eyes closed in respectful consideration of words
a quiet smile lingers while my lifesong sings
in the emotional wake of adoration embraced
in remembrance of all the unphysical things.

by Myxl Dove
© 2009 Mythic Elf Publishing. All rights preserved.
(like strawberries in a mason jar)



(Art by Robert Duval)

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I like a lot. I've been trying to write some poems myself. I just hate writing the same ol' same ol'. Amazing poem.

Posted 6/15/2011 2:03 PM by fuzzballs_and_lint - recommend - reply

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You know me, I'm not too big on most poetry, but this was awesome. Tender, strong, solidly anchored passion...I've seen this kind of feeling in my husband's eyes. Love it. :)
~V

Posted 6/16/2011 11:07 AM by TheMarriedFreshman Xanga True Member - recommend - reply


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